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Eirlyamae Warrior/Hunter
Posts : 424 Join date : 2010-08-01 Age : 26 Location : A Town Called Hypocrisy
| Subject: Frosty Comet Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:00 pm | |
| Sorry for the ugly watermark. ^^' I'm paranoid of theives using Google and this popping up, and it's not finished... Critics, pwease? | |
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Brook Beta
Posts : 3803 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Under your bed XD
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:40 pm | |
| Critique? OK, but I'm bad!
The comet is lovely, however, the tail is too short and thick in my eyes and a little big. However, the trails are gorgeous.
The grass is well drawn, however it looks too flat and too similar coloured. Try using a brush or drawing the strokes one by one.
The moon is nice, however even if it's a new moon it's a single black disk. You should have a black disc with the grey side.
The sky is very eye catching! It seems too light to be nighttime, but it's very starry and caught my eye.
Overall, the image is nice, but too light to be night time. But just applying a low opacity black screen over it should fix it. | |
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Eirlyamae Warrior/Hunter
Posts : 424 Join date : 2010-08-01 Age : 26 Location : A Town Called Hypocrisy
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Sep 25, 2010 5:36 am | |
| Well, to be honest, I didn't draw the trails myself. I used a few brushes for a lot of this. Still, that doesn't mean there's nothing I can do about it...
I'll take your critic and use them, but not right now. GIMP is refusing to let my tablet work properly with my brush. -.- Where the cursor goes, so does the brush, you stupid thing! | |
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Brook Beta
Posts : 3803 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Under your bed XD
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Sep 25, 2010 7:32 am | |
| =D Mmkay. Hope it was helpful.
Shh.. Don't tell.. I use brushes too | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Sep 25, 2010 7:55 am | |
| All I'll say is the comet should have two tails of colour, yellow and blue. | |
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Eirlyamae Warrior/Hunter
Posts : 424 Join date : 2010-08-01 Age : 26 Location : A Town Called Hypocrisy
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Sep 25, 2010 8:57 am | |
| I added the blue and yellow, but I can't see the yellow. I also added the moon's dark side, and the dark underneath. Is it dark enough, now? I'm still working on the comet's thickness, and the grass displeases me more now, so I'll carry on working on that. | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:13 am | |
| Do work on the grass, different shades :3 | |
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Arcaii Beta
Posts : 3432 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 28 Location : Yo visage
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Sep 25, 2010 10:33 pm | |
| Damn this Dial Up. I wish I could see the picture!
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Sep 26, 2010 6:05 am | |
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Brook Beta
Posts : 3803 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Under your bed XD
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:20 am | |
| Dial up? Wow, no offence, but isn't that a lil stone age? X3 | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:28 am | |
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Brook Beta
Posts : 3803 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Under your bed XD
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:29 am | |
| Trust me, dial-up is worse. It takes less time to load a page on a mobile, and that takes for-ev-er. | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:31 am | |
| I do know. I've used loads of types of connection. | |
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Arcaii Beta
Posts : 3432 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 28 Location : Yo visage
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:42 pm | |
| My friends hog the computer, too, so that's another problem. But right now I'm at Grandma's, so the internet isn't too bad.
Also the picture fucking rocks my sox. | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Oct 02, 2010 3:54 am | |
| My Gran doesn't even have internet... | |
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Eirlyamae Warrior/Hunter
Posts : 424 Join date : 2010-08-01 Age : 26 Location : A Town Called Hypocrisy
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Oct 02, 2010 4:34 am | |
| Thanks Arcaii. Don't know when I'll finish it, though. Last week, my tablet would sometimes work with GIMP. Now, not at all. *Glares at Trust* | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:56 am | |
| I've got a trust tablet, but I' still better with a mouse? | |
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Arcaii Beta
Posts : 3432 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 28 Location : Yo visage
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sat Oct 02, 2010 1:28 pm | |
| I've always wanted a tablet. | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Oct 03, 2010 5:15 am | |
| - Arcaii wrote:
- I've always wanted a tablet.
I don't use mine | |
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Arcaii Beta
Posts : 3432 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 28 Location : Yo visage
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:40 am | |
| SEND IT OVERSEEEEEEEEEEEEEAS | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:41 am | |
| But my mouse has commited sucide so I have to use my tablet to use the computer. | |
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Arcaii Beta
Posts : 3432 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 28 Location : Yo visage
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:43 am | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:44 am | |
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Arcaii Beta
Posts : 3432 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 28 Location : Yo visage
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:49 am | |
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Destinye Alpha
Posts : 7537 Join date : 2010-01-23 Age : 27 Location : Somewhere in the Universe
| Subject: Re: Frosty Comet Sun Oct 03, 2010 11:49 am | |
| IT HAS BEEN RAINING FOR 8 HOURS STRAUIGHT | |
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