So i will say
I am a song writer and one of the best amateur ones at that as ive only been doin it fro a couple of months
so heres a thread for posting those songs and for you to comment,rate and say how to improve them
BUT NOW
heres a song i made...a few hours back
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His eyes are fixed on her
Her eyes are elsewhere
He shud be aware
She no longer cares
LEFT STOMPED IN THE GROUND
LOVE WONT HEAR HIS SOUND
And as we live our censored lives
His love for her is in clear sight
EVERYTHING HAS GONE
HES LEFT WITH NOONE
And as she walks through town
She moves to turn around
To the man who stands and stares
Hes now away
She doesn't care
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Short but hey it was a quick thing
what you think?
